Six Sentence Story - The Cheerful Girl 230719

Tuesday 23 July 2019

Once upon a time, there lived a cheerful girl at the age of ten. 

She and her family happily lived on a farm, where everyday
would be so peaceful. Her name was Ana, and she enjoyed
lifting the frowns from those who were sad.

One day at school, there was a child who cryed and cryed.

She couldn’t resist helping him, and volenteered to take care,
and cheer him up.

After a while, he eventually opened up to her and they
became good friends. 

Language Features 2019

Can you identify the persuasive
language features in this text?

Fellow students, have you ever felt
afraid to walk around the school by yourself?   
In a recent survey carried out by the school council,
70 percent of us have been bullied at some time in our life at school.

The bullies are vicious, violent and vindictive .
Unfortunately, they are getting away with it.
Can this be fair?

We, the victims, are afraid of wearing the wrong trainers.
We are afraid of being too smart or too stupid.
We are afraid  of anything that might draw attention to ourselves.
The time has come for the fear to stop.

The bullies terrify other students, and yet they are cowards   themselves.
If we pull together we can fight this fear. Join me and fight this fear 8 today.

Facts - Red

Opinion - Blue

Rhetorical question - Green

Repetition - Pink

Emotive language - Orange

Statistic -  Black

Three ( Groups of ) - yellow  

The Predator 100419

Saturday 10 March 2018
The Predator


A low growl could be heard; a rumble that came from deep within the predator,
like a distant storm approaching.

With milky grey eyes like miniature moons, the cat began to prowl stealthily
out of the tall grass.
Covered with long thick and steady fur, waiting for the perfect time
to attack it’s happiest pray…

ROOAR! Out of the blue the innocent bunny sees the most horrifying animal,
as it opens it’s wide mouth filled with the sharpest teeth, and saliva craving for food.
Quickly it clutched onto me with it’s long pointy claws rushing me into his mouth.
Immediately, I sprung into the air and as soon as I hit the floor,
I ran, and ran hoping to see another day of life.

Running for my life, the only thing I hears are big, heavy stomping paws.
Suddenly, there was nothing but pitch black.

TO BE CONTINUED......

Vocabulary 110219

On the 11th of February, Monday afternoon, my class and I did some work.
A document, which we added tables to, for vocabulary we didn't know.
As you see, it's order goes from sentence,
word, then meaning,
to make sure we understand the full definition:

Monday 11 February 2019

Vocabulary
Sentence: I have four lollies,
and my friend has six.
He made things equival by giving me one. We now are equivalent.
Word: Equivalent
Meaning: To make things equal

Sentence: I need to find the most
efficient way to split 10 lollies
between my friend and I.
Word: Efficient
Meaning: To discover the most
best and fastest way possible

Sentence: I have multiple lollies.
Word: Multiple.
Meaning: Many ( More than one )

Sentence: My friend has a colourful lollipop,
unlike her, mines regular.
Word: Regular.
Meaning: Usual; normal.

Sentence: I hovered in my dream.
Word: Hovered.
Meaning: To fly or float in one place.